Wednesday, September 18, 2019

Stop Cutting Down our Jungles - Persuasive Writing

 Stop cutting down our jungles
Did you know that the cutting down of the worlds jungles is killing the
Orangutans and other amazing animals. Orangutans are great apes and the
closest related animal to us.


According to David Attenborough, cutting down our jungles and planting palm oil
trees or other crops instead is taking away the last of our Orangutans natural habitat.
David Attenborough also said that baby Orangutans currently living with their parents
in the wild could be the last to be able to live in the wild unless we do something about
it. 


More than one hundred Orangutans  die each week and 2,000 to 3,000 Orangutans
die each year because we are ruining their habitat.  Each year, more than 3.5 million
hectares of Indonasian and Malaysian forests are being replaced with  palm oil
plantations.  
When we cut down jungles, we are not only destroying the habitat and food supply
for many wonderful animals. The planet needs these jungles to be healthy.
They help to clear carbon dioxide, produce water and keep the planet cool.


Humans can be selfish but some of us just don’t know what is happening.
I suggest you watch Our Planet and visit their website to learn more and try and do
something to help.
It’s not too late, and if we all do something to help we can stop this destruction
and even  increase the amount of jungle. Hopefully our jungle animals will be able to
live a nice life in their natural habitat and our planet will be healthier.


I encourage you to look at the link, How to save our jungles.
By Bessie      
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This is my persuasive writing on stop cutting down our jungles.
Everyone in our class had to write a persuasive piece to tell what they wanted to stop our what they wanted to have. 










2 comments:

  1. Hi Bessie great piece of persuasive writing. I like the way you have added a link for more information. Have you done a piece of writing like this before?
    Blog you later
    Molly

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  2. thank you Molly
    I really enjoyed writing it

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