persuasive writing littering

WALT: Write a persuasive piece to convince someone of your opinion.

I enjoyed writing it and thinking of reasons.

Persuasive writing on littering

Did you know that littering is killing our fish and dolphins.

My first reason is that the more you litter rubbish is slowly
floating away into the sea and killing our sea creatures and
our birds because they think it’s food and they eat it and it gets
tangled up in there stomach.

Also it is ruining our environment and our sea because it is dirty
and when it goes into the sea it makes the sea dirty and it might
make animals sick.

Another one of my reasons is that not many plastics are
biodegradable and most of the plastic doesn’t break down and it
stays in the ocean for ever.

This is why I think littering is bad.

So please stop  littering it’s destroying our planet.

By Bessie

Persuasive Writing Success Criteria

Introduction

• Opening question
• Opinion/Reason

3 Reasons

• Each paragraph is one idea supported with your reasons/facts

ConclusionThis ties back/recaps back to the introductionHighlight
evidence of linking words.

I like your sentence at the end so please stop littering it’s destroying
our planet. You need to work on making your sentences bigger.

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