Friday, July 31, 2020

This is my before and after writing. 
what we had to do write a story and then make it better.
In my first piece I mist out when and why.
 In my second I got when ,where and how.
  

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  1. UnknownSeptember 4, 2020 at 2:09 PM

    Hi I,m Chavonne from grey main school. I thing this is really cool because it shows how you went back and looked through the writing so it is more descriptive language.Maybe you could add if it was a task or just something you.thank you for your time reading this. Bye

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