Showing posts with label term 2. Show all posts
Showing posts with label term 2. Show all posts

Thursday, July 8, 2021

Zeus

 

                      This is my picture of Zeus Sitting in Aurora and striking Hades His Brother.

Read My Myth in my last blog post to understand it.

The tale of Aurora



                   The tale of aurora

Some folks have their own opinion, I have mine too.

The magnificent lights of aurora are a sight to the eyes, although the tale behind is even better.

Our story is set in the snowy Mount Olympus, the home of all Greek gods. Their leader Zeus is the god of the gods, goddesses and weather, he sits at the top of Mount Olympus watching over all that we see.

Zeus owns something very precious, and very valuable. Seeing he is the god of weather he carries with him a lightning bolt. This is everything to the people of Mount Olympus.

So we begin our story.

It is early morning and it is still dark. Zeus is pondering over some thoughts when something caught his attention, he did not have his lightning bolt in his hand any more. He must have got side tracked by his thoughts. Knowing Zeus and how impatient he is ,he quickly flew into a rage after minutes of searching.

His suspicions grew and the crime was laid on his brother Hades, god of death and the underworld. Hades had always been jealous of his stronger, smarter and older brother, he was often trying to rattle him one way or another. Although Zeus was not completely powerless without his weapon.

He was quick to think up a plan to retrieve his property. He would send a demigod (A child of a god) on a quest to retrieve it for him.
Zeus soon had possession of his lighting bolt again.
As for Hades he had a cruel punishment, for Zeus could do whatever he liked. Hades was struck for eternity on Zeus' conditions.
So if you happen to see the Extravagant lights of Aurora this is the powerful lighting that is struck upon Hades.

By Bessie

Tuesday, May 19, 2020

Amelia Earhart

                                                                Amelia Earhart
Amelia Earhart was a famous aviator but went missing in her flight around the world. What happened to her? There are four common theories of what happened to her. Some people believe she was captured by the Japanese because she was secretly a spy. Another theory is that she crashed her plane into a deserted island and survived for some time. Others believe she flew home safely and changed her name because of all the attention. Finally many people think that she ran out of fuel and sunk in the water without a trace. It is unlikely that she flew home safely and changed her name because she enjoyed her fame. I doubt she was captured by the Japanese because we don’t have any evidence she was a spy or ended up with the Japanese. There is some evidence that she could have crashed her plane on an island. Some plane wreckage was found on a deserted island near where she went missing but it’s not clear that it was her plane. Although I can’t be sure, I believe the most convincing theory is that her plane ran out of fuel, crashed and sunk in the ocean without a trace. This could happen easily leaving no evidence.
                                                                      By Bessie

Wednesday, May 6, 2020


 This week we had to vocab on volcanos here is mine

Area & perimeter


This is my maths DLO I did on area and perimeter

Creative writing on pompeii


For writing this week we had to write somthing on Pompeii. This is my creative writing on Pompeii

Friday, April 24, 2020

The stone

This is my piece of writing about a stone dropped in water.
Can you imagine if you were the fish?


Thursday, April 23, 2020

Atlas poem


             
This is my 5 sences poem about my dog (Atlas)

Monday, April 20, 2020

yellow


Yellow colour poem

Here are some things that I did in lockdown.

Wednesday, April 15, 2020


WALT: give clear directions for someone to follow.

I can draw a map

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WALT: For maths this week we had to draw a map of our neighbourhood 

Friday, June 21, 2019

persuasive writing littering

WALT: Write a persuasive piece to convince someone of your opinion.
I enjoyed writing it and thinking of reasons.
Persuasive writing on littering
Did you know that littering is killing our fish and dolphins.
My first reason is that the more you litter rubbish is slowly
floating away into the sea and killing our sea creatures and
our birds because they think it’s food and they eat it and it gets
tangled up in there stomach.
Also it is ruining our environment and our sea because it is dirty
and when it goes into the sea it makes the sea dirty and it might
make animals sick.
Another one of my reasons is that not many plastics are
biodegradable and most of the plastic doesn’t break down and it
stays in the ocean for ever.
This is why I think littering is bad.
So please stop  littering it’s destroying our planet.
By Bessie





Persuasive Writing Success Criteria
Introduction
  • Opening question
  • Opinion/Reason


3 Reasons
  • Each paragraph is one idea supported with your reasons/facts
ConclusionThis ties back/recaps back to the introductionHighlight
evidence of linking words.


I like your sentence at the end so please stop littering it’s destroying
our planet. You need to work on making your sentences bigger.
Thanks for the feedback.


Tuesday, May 21, 2019