Friday, September 3, 2021

The man


This week in writing we got to choose our own picture to write about this is mine on ( The man)

 

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  1. LyndallPrendergastSeptember 6, 2021 at 1:59 PM

    Hi Bessie,

    This is a fantastic piece of writing that evokes emotion in the reader. I love your choice of descriptive language. My favourite would have to be how you have described his eyes as frail.

    Keep up the great work.

    Mrs P

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Thank-you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comments.

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